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为下面的文章标题写一篇中等长度的评论，评价一下它的优缺点，并且谈谈如果是你写这篇文章，你会怎么写。（40词左右）
题：A Good Teacher
内容：The head of a primary school asked his students to write an essay on"A Good Teacher".When the first class began，he asked a student to read his essay.The boy did it well.Then the teacher asked all the students in the class to say something about a teacher who was good at his work.
My good teacher is Miss Gao.She is 36 years old.She has long hair and big eyes.She is very friendly and kind.She is also very helpful.Last year，our classroom was on the fourth floor of the building.It was difficult for her to bring water from the fifth floor.So we always offered to help her.
Our class had an English test yesterday.Miss Gao gave us all A's.
题：My Neighbour
内容：I have a very nice neighbour.Her name is Ann.She comes from America.She has two sons and a daughter.Her two sons study in a university and her daughter is 12 years old.She likes China very much.She speaks Chinese very well.We often go shopping Together.She knows a lot about Chinese history.She usually tells me something about American life.
My neighbour often helps me with my English.I often help her with her Chinese.We are good friends.
In a Cafe
内容：We often go to a cafe near our school.The waiters are all very young.They can't speak much English.One day，a woman asked one of them to bring her a cup of tea.But he did not understand her and said"Suck tea".The woman was very angry.I was very happy.Then I got up and told him what to do.He thanked me and then went away.